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WORK IN PROGRESS - I'm hoping to get some feedback from some fresh eyes on this. I would like to know what's working and what's not. Second half score is still temp.

Log Line: After suffering a home invasion Xavier installs a security system, instead of making him feel safe, it introduces him into someone else's world and only increases his anxiety.

John Cale

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San Francisco, CA, USA

Film school student turned techy who is now looking to get back into filmmaking. I have been working on shorts in a film co-op and also have invested in several feature projects. Ready to pursue my own projects now. My focus has always been on production so I am now trying to do more writing more...

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