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I came up with this idea after my home was burglarized and wanted to capture the uneasy and paranoid feelings which followed. Hoping to find out if this is working as a thriller and if it is keeping your interest. Also any ideas on how I can shorten it would be great. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

San Francisco, CA, USA
Film school student turned techy who is now looking to get back into filmmaking. I have been working on shorts in a film co-op and also have invested in several feature projects. Ready to pursue my own projects now. My focus has always been on production so I am now trying to do more writing more...

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