Logline: A spacecraft traveling to a distant colony planet transporting thousands of people has a malfunction in its sleep chambers. As a result two passengers are awakened 90 years early. Final scene: After Jim Preston saves the ship from fire , Aurora Lane saves Jim from a detached tether catapulting him into space. She drags him to the infirmary where with a code the med computer brings him back to life. In a tender scene Jim presents Aurora with a handmade ring symbolizing his commitment to her. Years later when Jim and Aurora are gone the starship people and crew return from hibernation and the crew is surprised when they enter the grand concourse to find a beautiful and living arboretum.
Jill Marie McMurray
Grass Valley, CA, USA
Independent filmmaker director writer passionate about all creative aspects of the process of collaboration in bringing a vision to screen.
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