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A young woman captures a fly in a jar, but is it the insect or herself that's trapped?

6 pages. This is a no-dialogue short based around one character. My last draft received some very helpful critiques and I would appreciate any feedback you have to continue making improvements! I do intend to shoot this short myself.

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Present stage of this work: Revision

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