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A young woman captures a fly in a jar, but is it the insert or herself that's trapped?

This is a no-dialogue short based around one character. This is my first draft and I would appreciate any feedback you have - especially considering this is the first time I've used sound effect and tone cues in my script. Thanks!

#Depression #MentalHealth

Present stage of this work: First draft or cut

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