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This is my first short film after graduating from film school. We are in the middle of the re-editing process (editing, sound & grade) and would like some feedback on the story, like the ending, and how it's being interpreted. I'm also wondering about what aspect ratio I should choose for the film. 1:9, 4:3 or cinemascope..
Too, I was wondering if I should translate the german line to English on the captions/subtitle?
The last day of work with this project is the 10th of December, I would be thankful for feedback before the date.
I'm the director, writer, and producer of this short film.
Short synopsis: "The last day before Alex returns to Germany. Caroline seizes the opportunity to make him study in Norway, but things do not turn out as they had thought... "