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WORK IN PROGRESS - This is the second time submitting for feedback after making some changes. I think it's getting close but I am looking forward to hear about what is and is not working.

Log Line: After suffering a home invasion Xavier installs a security system, instead of making him feel safe, it introduces him into someone else's world and only increases his anxiety.

San Francisco, CA, USA
Film school student turned techy who is now looking to get back into filmmaking. I have been working on shorts in a film co-op and also have invested in several feature projects. Ready to pursue my own projects now. My focus has always been on production so I am now trying to do more writing more...

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