About this submission
Adrian and Dalilah are two young lovers that swear to each other eternal love. But when Dalilah goes missing on her way back home, while walking through the dark forest paths, Adrian must venture into the heart of darkness in search of his beloved and face the terrible creature that stalks the forest when night falls.
I want to point out a couple of things: one is that I know there are a couple of moments where a minor mishap in make up can be seen, but it is something that can and will be fixed in color correction; I have already spoken to my colorist about this, and she assures me it can be done once I have the final cut. So please, do not let that distract you. Also, this is a nearly final version of the short film, but there are still a few details that I need to polish before I have the final cut, so there are a couple of parts without music/sound.
What I want to know the most is: is the story understandable? Do the characters feel real and relatable? Visually speaking, what stands out? How does the setting for the story make you feel? And, most importantly, since this is a proof-of-concept short film, did you like the ending? Does it make you want to know more about the film, the story, and the world where it takes place?