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A man's afternoon routine is disrupted by a carefully placed note in a library book.

This short was inspired by a Writer's Cafe prompt! It's meant to be a film without dialogue. I submitted an earlier draft and got some great feedback from this site, so I would appreciate any any additional comments you have on the final version. Thank you!

Present stage of this work: Nearly final version

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