This was for a 48 hour film competition in LA this year. On a Friday night, your team gets two random genres to pick from and must the complete the film in 48 hours. And alas! We got a musical. It's about an office girl who tries to sing her way out of her oppressive environment. I haven't released it online yet, but I thought that this would be the perfect place to upload it for Kate, a veteran comedy writer to critique. I wrote it with my wife, and directed it. I'm planning on reshooting the establishing shot, any advice on a tighter edit would be appreciated, and please tell me if I should get rid of the word "pretentiously enjoyed" in the V.0. Thanks a bunch!