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The fourth draft of Natty to Natalie. It is a short film about an encounter between sixteen years old Natty and the middle-aged man Bob, while they both pursue their love and connection; Natty has realized that the truth is far from what she believes. I finished this draft last week but today I reviewed my script once more and it seems like there is some writing that I am unsure of. I am not quite sure what I am looking for, I am just as lost as Natalie in the script. Any feedback and help would be much appreciated. This is a thesis film script that I am looking to film, thank you.

Los Angeles, CA, USA
Immigrated to U.S. years back, looking to pursue in the film business as a screenwriter/director more...

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