Darren, a virgin goes into a brothel with his friend and as he finds a special connection with a prostitute, he doesn't realize that what he has can be taken away anytime until the day he goes back to the brothel to meet with the prostitute. He finds out that she has been replaced by another prostitute.

The fourth draft of Natty to Natalie. It is a short film about an encounter between sixteen years old Natty and the middle-aged man Bob, while they both pursue their love and connection; Natty has realized that the truth is far from what she believes. I finished this draft last week but today I reviewed my script once more and it seems like there is some writing that I am unsure of. I am not quite sure what I am looking for, I am just as lost as Natalie in the script. Any feedback and help would be much appreciated. This is a thesis film script that I am looking to film, thank you.

9th draft