About this submission
In a dystopian world, roam a pack of thick-skinned boys who grew up to the lullabies of bombs and fireworks. Buto, a nine-year-old kid, is ostracized by the gang leader, Shicha. In his quest to seek revenge from his runty nemesis, Buto finds a toy in the ruins that resembles the terrifying missiles he sees in the sky. The early civilization used to call this toy "Dildo," yet for Buto it is nothing but a great opportunity to get back at Shicha and become the new leader of the group. Will he succeed in his mission?
Present stage of this work: Revision
I would greatly appreciate feedback on the storytelling elements of my film submission, including the plot development, character arcs, and overall narrative flow. Additionally, insights on the technical aspects such as cinematography, editing, and sound design would be valuable in further refining the visual and auditory experience of the film.