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"A Flote"
Spanish for “to keep above water”

Logline: After the death of their father, two brothers are forced to grow up faster than expected to keep their family afloat.

This is a story about Brotherhood, Family & Sacrifice.

- I wrote the script for my senior thesis film, which I unfortnaltey was not able to shoot due to the start of the pandemic in march 2020. Since I have continued to improve this script with the hopes to shoot it sometime in the near future.

- I am looking for feedback on the pacing of the script and the character development.


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