About this submission
Hi there. I was the "alumni of the week" last week, and was giving you all feedback. It seems like such a great forum, I figured I'd share a little something I wrote. This is a short film that seems too big to make as a short, so I've been trying to conceive of it as a feature. Could go in any direction. So I'm happy for general feedback but particularly interested in random ideas on how to expand it.