About this submission
Thank you for reviewing my work. This SHORT 9 min long is the rough cut, almost lock. The project is based on an exercise I did at Sundance collab directing class. Sound is not done and music is temporary but indicates the direction. It's few stock footage shots still. Please let me know what you think about the story. Is it clear? and Please indicate whats works and what does not work - so I can possibly improve it.