About this submission
THIS IS JUST THE TEASER - NOT THE MOVIE (The movie is going to have a 90min)
This is a documentary about Tomé, a 18yo boy who died after a lot of risk behavior and who left us a lot of his touching and sensitive writings about our society and how is being blinded with the norms, not letting people being who they really are. A documentary that will address topics such as adolescence, drugs and risk behavior, formal education, parent-child relationships and mourning.
The sentence in the end of the film teaser says "We are all born with wings but if they are being cut along the way when we reach adolescence we can fall while trying to fly.".
We are still in Pre-Production and I'm making the interviews to all the friends and family of Tomé to start making the script, it's my first feature film and all advice is welcome. What are the most important questions that you think I need to make myself to have a good documentary script? Any tips on writing a documentary script?
My background is from fiction film so I want to mix both, not in the story, the story is 100% real, but I want to make beautiful and symbolic reenacts of Tomé's story like it's in the teaser, in this teaser I made a symbolic reenact of his death, Tomé died in a fall from a building. What do you think about it?