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Stub is a female-led grounded sci-fi thriller about identity and memory. It's about a loyal bodyguard who fights to protect her employer from a shadowy foe, yet her allegiance is tested when she discovers her enemy could unlock the truth about her past. It’s Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind meets The Bourne Identity.

An earlier draft made it to the top 15% of the Academy Nicholl Fellowship this year, and I'd really appreciate some feedback on what works and what could be improved.

NOTE: This draft has been re-revised after the really helpful feedback from Collab readers :)

Thank you!

Sheffield, UK

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