I think I've touched this script about 6 times. I'm going to be touching it once more on the ending, but... writers! I'd like to submit this to a few places, and eventually make it into a short film. I'd like to get feedback on if it's dynamic, if it's interesting, if the dialogue works, and if the tone and intention is clear

The story is about a couple trying to make it work after a horrific incident tears them apart. I got the idea from a song actually, and what happens when people have to grieve in a relationship. It's something everyone's gone through, or will go through. And like everyone, it's handled differently from person to person

Thank you for all feedback on this. It's appreciated