It is a partial (two-act) pilot episode for a fantasy-genre series.
Present stage of this work: First draft or cut
1. First impressions (as audience & professional) + Do you want to know what happens next? 2. Concept & Themes 3. Flow of Writing/Pace 4. Is the suspense being built? 5. Characters and Character relationships 6. One thing you like and one thing to improve on? 7. Any and all comments that you came to your mind