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A man wakes up in a cell that sustains his life. A man on a television set warns him of the danger of leaving the cell. But when a beautiful woman arrives and tells him otherwise, he must chose. It is a WIP rough cut with temp music. I loved the Wakening, Danis... I'm submitting this because I'd love your feedback. The material I have to work with right now is with editing, mixing, and score. I would love thoughts in how to tighten it, what you think about some of the more artsy fartsy choices (some like em so far, some don't. The waves and the scene where the character's imagination comes alive in the wall) and any advice on vfx. Thanks!

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Sung Shin
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