A young and talented architect’s evening slowly descends into chaos as he works himself further and further into the ungodly hours of the night.
Present stage of this work: Nearly final version
Generally, I would like to know people's impression of this story. I feel that have the story here - the beats are (to me) quite deliberate; but I would like to know from others how it lands.
I have gotten comments about stakes and conflict. In how the main character (Elder) doesn't have enough of these elements. I'd like to know more feedback regarding this - because to me, I think these elements are here but not necessarily presented in a linear in a traditional storytelling approach. Curious to hear thoughts.
Some other notes: The film, in general, carries a tone that caters to a niche audience with an eclectic taste in cinema. Its visual and tonal elements invites those particularly appreciate exploring the human condition through animation and non-linear approaches to cinema.