I've given the protagonist an unusual name, one that might not be taken seriously, even though the situation in the story is serious. I have gotten both positive and negative notes on the name. However, I am really more concerned with the action of the story. It is a sort of DIE HARD in space. I received advice on creating more backstory, which I did. When I showed it to a mentor, she recommended going back to the original. So that is what is here. Any feedback is welcomed.