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Steve struggles to get over the death of his brother so his parents advise him to meet with a councilor. But something's not quite right.

Present stage of this work: Nearly final version

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Lucas Reinke

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I am a young keen screenwriting lover, who has a keen imagination and can whip up a story from almost anything thrown at me. I would love to get involved into screenwriting as I have a keen interest in writing and analysing films. more...

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