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Short film script: a story about a mother-daughter relationship.
This is a nearly final version of the script and I would love to receive feedback on it.
It’s a very important project to me and I want it to be the best it can be, so I’m open to any suggestion that can help make it stronger.

Particularly I would love to check these points:
- does the message come across clearly?
-do all the characters contribute to the story?
-is there enough build up on the dramatic moments?
-does the main character have an interesting development?

Feel free to be honest, I love constructive criticism and I’d love to hear what you think about this script.


I’m an actress, writer and producer currently working on my first short film. I love movies more than anything and I believe they are the best way to communicate a message. I love collaborating with like minded artists to create something unique and meaningful. My goal is to contribute something special to the film and tv industry through my acting and writing. I’m open to connect with other creatives and I believe together we can create something beautiful. more...

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