Short film script: a story about a mother-daughter relationship.
This is a nearly final version of the script and I would love to receive feedback on it.
It’s a very important project to me and I want it to be the best it can be, so I’m open to any suggestion that can help make it stronger.

Particularly I would love to check these points:
- does the message come across clearly?
-do all the characters contribute to the story?
-is there enough build up on the dramatic moments?
-does the main character have an interesting development?

Feel free to be honest, I love constructive criticism and I’d love to hear what you think about this script.

Kindly,
Letty