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When a black man with an anxiety disorder finds himself on a rare date, Homeland Security interrupts to inform him that his wife has been murdered and involved him in international espionage surrounding a stolen prototype. The only problem, he's not married.
This feature spy-thriller uses suspense, action, and awkward comedy to explore the mental illness of anxiety as a disability. It also touches on themes of race and gender to further deepen the narrative. Follow Kendrick Reed as he desperately works to keep it together where staying alive is secondary to staying in control of himself.
This version is a few revisions in. There are some areas that I can tell could be improved upon, perhaps be scrapped an re-written but I've gotten to the point of not being able to see the forest for the trees. I would love some fresh eyes on it with potential ideas on how it could be refined. Thanks for the help!