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When a black man with an anxiety disorder finds himself on a rare date, Homeland Security interrupts to inform him that his wife has been murdered and involved him in international espionage surrounding a stolen prototype. The only problem, he's not married.

This feature spy-thriller uses suspense, action, and awkward comedy to explore the mental illness of anxiety as a disability. It also touches on themes of race and gender to further deepen the narrative. Follow Kendrick Reed as he desperately works to keep it together where staying alive is secondary to staying in control of himself.

This version is a few revisions in. There are some areas that I can tell could be improved upon, perhaps be scrapped an re-written but I've gotten to the point of not being able to see the forest for the trees. I would love some fresh eyes on it with potential ideas on how it could be refined. Thanks for the help!

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As a neurodivergent kid, I found my refuge in stories. They were my guide to navigating a world that often felt alien—hostile. That’s why I became a storyteller—to build shelters with words so others wouldn’t be lost. Not surprisingly, my talents didn’t follow traditional paths. People found my voice on a new platform—YouTube. Since 2009 I’ve built massive online communities with 200M views and 2500 years of watchtime. There, I honed the visceral rhythm of hooking an audience, and proved that if you want to talk about big, challenging ideas, the best vehicle is a compelling story people can't put down. Now, I use that skill as a screenwriter and novelist. Wielding action-adventure stories about complex disabled heroes with gentle masculinity and queer identities, I use the excitement of genre to explore universal themes of resilience and finding your community. My work, recognized with Shorty Impact Awards, Anthem Awards, and partnerships like Kevin Bacon's Six Degrees, isn't about building escapist worlds. It's about using fiction to tell the truth. more...

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