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In a dystopian company town, a 20-something lesbian vengefully buys oodles of lottery scratchers with her ex’s charge card. When she wins the jackpot in company currency, she spends the money on a detox cruise… unaware her ex has also boarded the vessel.

These are the first 20 pages of a feature film.

Present stage of this work: First draft or cut

I am about halfway through my first draft (I have more written than this) but I want to know if the beginning is working. Please only read if you like comedy!

LEEANNE LOWRY

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LeeAnne Lowry was born and raised in the suburbs of Kansas City, Kansas. She attended Stephens College in Columbia, Missouri, earning a B.F.A. in Digital Filmmaking in 2015 and an M.F.A. in Writing for Film and Television in 2019. Since then she has worked for Newsy, Ragtag Film Society, and various freelance film projects. As of 2023, she and her wife are located in Columbia, Missouri after several years in Portland, Oregon and Nashville, Tennessee. Together they are writing a dystopian romantic comedy called "Daintree Slims". LeeAnne is also shopping a comedy series called "Hard Work". This comedy pilot has been evolving for four years, and has ranked in the top 3% of comedy pilots on Coverfly. more...

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