First 20 Pages of Sci-Fi Pilot TV Series
Present stage of this work: Revision
(1) Included a new opening which introduced the antagonist. The only other glimpse of the antagonist is the security camera in the high school hallway. Later, in the pilot we find out what the antagonist is up to. (2) Hopefully, I have corrected the unintended misgendering of Carl. The only section where Carl is intentionally misgendered is by the nurse. (3) The "thing" that Ada cares most about is being popular, especially on social media/metaverse. She will try to regain her spot as queen bee in the pilot after her transformation, only to crash and burn.