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It's a personal essay reflecting on my experience leaving Islam while living in an Islami country in the middle east. Part rant, part how-to dodge Thought Police tutorial and part anecdotes.

I appreciate any tips on editorial writing, structure, and style.

This is the fourth draft

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Manama, Bahrain
I'm a cinematographer and filmmaker. I work in live broadcast, and freelance on the side. My end game goal is to produce, DP, and direct movies within a community. I'm happy to wear different hats and can be pretty flexible. I studied graphic design, then worked as a designer and a freelance illustrator/ fine artist. Until summer 2017, when I switched to broadcast camera work and filmmaking. Now, I shoot whenever I can, and wonder why I didn't get into this sooner. more...
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