Hello! This is a first draft of a screenplay I wrote earlier this year. The logline is:"An infamous reality court TV show Judge is forced to represent herself when she's put on trial for the murder of her elderly neighbour. "I'm about to start work on a second draft, and the tips provided in the Ask Sundance section are amazing (especially splitting out the character arcs!) - however, I've never done a rewrite before, so any extra tips would be much appreciated!Appreciate this is a full-length, so even any feedback on just the first 5-10 pages would be incredible. Thank you so much to anyone who gives it a look :)

An introduction to the character of JOY from the first draft of my screenplay The Judge, The People Vs.Logline: A disgraced family-court TV judge must represent herself in court when she's accused of the murder of her elderly neighbour.