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I came up with this idea after my home was burglarized and wanted to capture the uneasy and paranoid feelings which followed. Hoping to find out if this is working as a thriller and if it is keeping your interest.

This is the second version I'm posting after incorporating the feedback which I've received. Looking to shoot this next month so thanks in advance for any feedback!

John Cale

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San Francisco, CA, USA

Film school student turned techy who is now looking to get back into filmmaking. I have been working on shorts in a film co-op and also have invested in several feature projects. Ready to pursue my own projects now. My focus has always been on production so I am now trying to do more writing more...

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