Learn to Write Action That Works As Drama in this 9/19 Advisor Studio!
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Learn to Write Action That Works As Drama in this 9/19 Advisor Studio!
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In Japan, after befriending a student who claims to be the victim of teacher abuse, a seriously introverted, OCD-suffering foreign language teacher taps into the power of his samurai alter ego to overcome his own childhood trauma and to help the student take revenge.
Present stage of this work: Nearly final version
Is the introduction to Mishima understandable? Do you get a good sense of who this man was?
How well does Andy’s trauma come through in the way he behaves?
How easy is it for a non-Japanese speaker to understand the Japanese content?
Is the tone adequately leading into a dark psychological thriller?
And any other feedback – thanks.