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An absurdist action comedy featuring a couple that fights over how the coffee was made. This is a VERY early rough cut with ADR by me (i.e. writer-director-editor), NO foley, early sound effects, etc. Seeking any feedback, but just a sense of how it plays despite its incomplete state is useful so I can focus my efforts on where they are needed most. Thank you!

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New York, NY, USA
Writer-Director. Graduate of the UCLA Professional Program in Screenwriting for both Film and TV. Stowe Story Labs Writers Room Program deconstructing BOSCH with the show creators, and developing a new TV show. more...

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