Logline: Unable to shake their sweet-nature, three women want to change their ways when a not-so-sweet force enters their lives. This is the first draft of part one for this web series pilot. 16 pages. Has some language. #comedy #ensemblecast
Present stage of this work: First draft or cut
Pacing, clarity, characters, interest, dialogue
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