About this submission
Hello, My name is Francisco Alarcon and I am independent filmmaker based out of Mexico City. I have been working on editing this film for a couple of months. I wasn’t suppose to be the editor (I am also the director) of my own work but since the editor fell through I took it upon myself to edit.
This is a first cut (hopefully pretty close to a final cut) and I want locked picture ASAP before I move on to the mixing and color correction and all that good stuff. It still needs sound design. The music is going to be a big part of the film and will guide the audience through the story.
I’m not including a synopsis because I really want you guys to tell me what you got out of the story and what you think the story is about.
Let me know if some parts feel too long. Or if the film in general feels long.
Are there any parts that you found boring?
Do the long takes work?
I appreciate your time. I know we as filmmakers are always busy and it really does mean a lot that someone takes the time to watch your work and give you feedback. I will do the same for others.
BTW, I WILL BE UPDATING MY FILM AS I INCORPORATE YUR FEEDBACK INTO IT>. THANKS.