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This is the first installment in a multi-award-winning fantasy saga.
On his high school graduation day, a young outcast named Lachlan gets bullied and beaten by some jocks. He flees to a castle by his home in Ireland and accidentally travels to a magical world he never knew existed. When he arrives, he finds out the father who abandoned him as a child is their king but has been kidnapped. It is now up to Lachlan to rescue the father he has never known, and marshal good against evil in this battle for all humanity.
(Final or close to final draft)

Danielle R Erlich
Paradise Valley, AZ, USA
28x international award-winning, 48x nominated, 61x selected, published Sci-fi/ Fantasy screenwriter

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