About this submission
When their individual cases collide, Private Intelligence Operative Cassandra Smith and FBI Special Agent Jake Riley find themselves forced into an uncomfortable alliance in order to track down a dangerous cyber terrorist.
This is the third major draft that the pilot has undergone and I'm looking for any way to make it better. I would really appreciate feedback on the pacing of the story, if you feel like the characters are balanced, and if the pilot leaves you excited to know what comes next. Codename: Grey is intended to be a hour long network drama.