About this submission
I've been challenging myself to write in a stream of consciousness way, these pages are basically the first act for a feature.
To summarize I would pitch it like this:
It’s called A Portrait of Us and it’s a Drama with Psychological Thriller aspects.
It’s kind of like The sixth sense meets Personal Shopper
It follows artistic and haunted, high schoolers, Enid Mcgrath and Andrew Thompson as they begin a relationship after meeting at their therapist's office.
Problems occur as Enid starts being haunted by the memories of her dead, older twin brothers, Liam and Kieran and begins losing her grip on reality.
Now Enid must find a way to keep her sanity and release the ghost of her siblings in order to move on and find stability.
I'd just like to know if there's something in this pages worth pursuing, I think there is and I know that I want my protagonist to make it till the end, but I also want to play with the idea that this that we are seeing is not real but a kinda in-between place where she's at with these various characters in order to accept what really happened.