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LOGLINE: When a twenty-something IT worker loses his job in the city, he's forced to move out to the country to live and work on his brother's hobby farm.

It is loosely based on the people and situations of my life, and a potential contingency plan I have if my life falls apart.

This idea was wholly conceived of, mildly developed, and tossed together for the purpose of this challenge. The attached is a rough first draft. It is at a level that I would never show anyone under normal circumstances. Enjoy.

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DardyFinger
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St Paul, MN, USA
Web developer who would rather be a television producer.

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