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This was an exercise in modern mythology. Originally this feature was written as an exploration into guilt. Its use of a surreal environment allows the script to play out like a dream, as though entering the main character's mind. This most recent draft broadened the focus of guilt to encompass the idea of individuality, identity and instinct.
I submit this as "An Unforgettable Entrance" due to the tone of the script. I believe it rather seamlessly hops genre expectations and endears the reader to its quirky style.

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