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This is my second short film, that I have written and directed. My first short film was much more artistic and this time I wanted to focus more on a narrative piece.

This is still a working rough, Unfortunately my actor canceled last second and I had to step in and act which made it very difficult to direct also im not an actor haha.

What I want to learn is better pacing and continuity with dialogue. Im still perplexed on how to make that look natural and flow right.

Always learning and appreciate all of the feedback!

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