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This script came out of decades witnessing repression of science firsthand. Actually missions to deep space all lead to certain death of males after 100 days per latest peer reviewed science studies.
In press see https://www.ucsusa.org/our-work/center-science-and-democracy/promoting-scientific-integrity/climate-change.html. Interesting but does not reach masses.
Somehow this message needs to become popular and part of culture. This is objective to reach masses and as they absorb storyline some truths of repression being done become part of their principles.
This dramatic script based on true events and 100% true science of what would really happen to 3 interacting couples chosen, on mission to Mars, results of such a voyage and motives driving such a voyage. It also gives snap-shop futuristic vision , into next 300 years and ourselves. Its a fun page turner full of subplots, twists and turns. It even incorporates a new optical set trick to allow actors and even a dog freely act and move all around inside the movie set of the rotating spacecraft. Like in “2001” but more freedom. (For medical reasons its necessary on long space voyages to create gravity like acceleration )
Photo merge of ESA, Princess Elizabeth and Perlan and agefotostock.com images to give simulated movie poster.
Tagline:
They call it the space gene, and only a few women have it. This is her story, the NASA engineer that discovered her and the first tragic mission to Mars, which changed the course of humanity.
Enjoy this epic, support science, comments welcome.
Good day
Pat
Ps music is not supposed to be explicit called out in script, but here is envisioned music
Intro Evanescence “My last breath”
2 Allan Parsons “Games People Play“
And 11
12 inca Carnaval Huamahuaqueno
19 cntr rm Allan Parsons “Eye in Sky”
21 pov Scary forbidding music.
23 bar Adele “Set Fire to the Rain”
24 train lively inca music
33 Fleetwood Mac “The Chain”
34 lab Cris Cab “Liar Liar”
38 nasa Peter Schilling “Major Tom”
46 orbit Alan Parsons “Eye in Sky”
54 flshbk Fleetwood Mac
71 pov E Fleetwood Mac “The chain”
74 half karaoke Fleetwood Mac.
79 clseup Allen Parsons “Breakdown”
100 landlab Phil Collins edge of night
121 safety room Zedd “Stay”
133 night Allan Parson “Time”.
134 pov Casting Crowns “O Come, O Come, Emmanuel” background.
141 , crying now. She climbs to safe room in center. Music like Evanescence -
142 safety hold like My last Breath
142 future Music like Styx “Mr. Roboto” or Europe “Final Countdown”.