About this submission
This is a short film about loss. When my mom asked me to go to visit my father's grave with her, I was anxious about the feelings I would have and the memories it would bring up. I felt like this is a common theme as we have all lost people we love, so I wanted to try and capture that.
I am new to filmmaking. I shot this on my iPhone. I am working on telling a story and getting new and interesting shots and camera angles. I am used to being a YouTuber which is a whole different pacing, so I would like some feedback on my storytelling, specifically if it makes sense, and also on my camera work and what I could have shot more creatively. And lastly I would love some feedback on my transitions.