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This is a resubmission after receiving very helpful feedback. I had a few just plain stupid mistakes in my work that made it unclear for the reader. This revised draft hopefully more clearly expresses what I envisioned this piece to be.
The "edit this submission" menu makes it seem as if this is allowed. But if revising and resubmitting disqualifies me, it is what it is. I had to fix those mistakes.

Minneapolis, MN, USA

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