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When their individual cases collide, Private Intelligence Operative Cassandra Smith and FBI Special Agent Jake Riley find themselves forced into an uncomfortable alliance in order to track down a dangerous cyber terrorist.

This is the third major draft that the pilot has undergone and I'm looking for any way to make it better. I would really appreciate feedback on the pacing of the story, if you feel like the characters are balanced, and if the pilot leaves you excited to know what comes next. Codename: Grey is intended to be a hour long network drama.

J.E. Russell
Dallas, TX, USA
I have been writing and creating stories in one way or another most of my life, and it's always been my goal to write professionally. Most of my experience is in prose, but in the last couple of years I've redirected to scriptwriting. The deeper I get into it, the more I feel like it's the medium best designed to tell the stories that I'm interested in telling. Within the next year I'm hoping to make the leap and move out to L.A. to start the next phase of this exciting journey I've found myself on.

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