About this submission
First dates can be nerve-wracking.
ANYA is a short about a first date with a sci-fi twist.
This is the first draft. ANYA is actually my first ever full short, though I've dabbled in writing scenes from time to time.
I'm particularly interested in hearing feedback about how the phone call can best be depicted on screen. Would an intercut be more interesting? Or is it currently short enough that simply hearing the second person suffices?
Other feedback is always welcome as well, of course.