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I've been developing “Backyard Brothers” while working on other projects. I'm not sure if it would be a feature film or a television series yet. The main character, Sal Salerno, is a hot headed landscaper turned reality television host. He and his younger brother Joe transform backyards in New Jersey on HGTV.

This scene was written specifically for the monthly submission exercise. I haven’t broken the story on the actual "Backyard Brothers" script, but I could see this being the inciting incident that sets us off on our journey with Sal.

Charles Griffin Gibson
Oslo, Norway
Documentary film and television editor. Used to be based in New York, but I recently moved to Norway with my wife. I'm joining this community to share and read screenwriting work. I've been writing for since film school, and my goal is to eventually get some of my work produced. I recently edited a feature documentary film, "This is Personal", which premiered at the 2019 Sundance Film Festival.

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